3 Examples of Great Product Descriptions that Convert and Rank

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With more than 350 million products listed on Amazon alone, and thousands of other competitive eCommerce businesses, product descriptions must work hard to stand out. When you read a truly great product description, something about it reaches out and grabs your interest. You have to read it. And you have to buy it — or you find yourself fighting hard not to buy it.

You already know what doesn’t work in a product description, because you’ve read so many boring ones. BrandNames.net founder Justin Hamel puts it well when he describes a bad product description as “Using boring descriptions that just highlight the product features without drawing a correlation between the product/service and the buyer’s wants and needs.

Experienced product description writers are masters at connecting products to buyer’s wants and needs and highlighting features and benefits, but that’s only part of what makes a great product description.

So what makes a great product description? A few key elements jump out:

  • It resonates with the target audience. A product description for a bass guitar pedal grabs a niche reader, even if it’s almost incomprehensible to a non-musician. Write with your buyer persona in mind and you’re much more likely to help them with make their purchase decision.
  • It tells a story. Consumers tend to draw an emotional connection with products that have a story behind them.
  • The format is easily digestible. Especially online, people scan instead of reading every word, so use of short paragraphs and bullet points help.
  • It uses media effectively. Great product pages focus on selling the product with a mix of media types. Use of images is vital, so the consumer knows what they’re getting. Videos are also a great help, especially when audio is involved (that bass guitar pedal, for example).
  • It highlights the most important or unique features first. We already know that dishwashers get dishes clean. Tell me what makes THIS dishwasher different from the rest. Strategic use of power words can help with this.
  • It lets the consumer know how the product can impact their life. A great product description draws a picture for the reader of how the item can fill a need or solve a problem. Writing product descriptions that accomplish this can really spike your conversion rate.
  • It’s written with search engines in mind. Product descriptions that sell well do all the things above, but they also help you organically rank in Google’s search results. How do you do that? It largely comes down to knowing which keywords to include in key points and understanding what intent those keywords signal so you can write your content to match.

Rachel Genson from BigCommerce.com adds that product descriptions should be “short, sweet and effective,” and cautions that marketers need to learn when to “show and not tell.

Let’s take a look at some outstanding product descriptions to see how these elements come together.

Taco Bell’s Black Bean Burrito

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John Lincoln, CEO of Ignite Visibility, points out this PD as an amazing example of product description writing that reinforces the brand. It’s whimsical and quirky, and it grabs the reader looking for late night munchies.

The Takeaway: Don’t be afraid to show some personality and style in your PDs. When a PD tells a story and matches the tone of the product, it converts — even for people who don’t like black beans.

Florida Farms’ Gift Basket

This PD surprises by starting with oranges and grapefruits, not the most expected holiday treat. It’s a brilliant choice, making yet another gift basket stand out during the holidays. Appealing adjective choices and the full description let you know what you’re getting.

The Takeaway: Note all those specifics. They let the reader feel confident that this basket is indeed a worthy gift. Of course this PD has a great photo with it, since no one would buy a gift sight unseen.

Think Geek’s Star Wars BB-8 Waffle Maker

Think Geek acknowledges that its readership is part of a special tribe — the tribe that needs something as specialized as a character-based waffle iron. This PD turns a want into a need with clever writing.

The Takeaway: Pull out all the stops to resonate with a niche audience, pulling out the in-jokes and targeted references to let the reader know you “get” them.

David B

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David has been a freelance online writer for a decade and has written for clients on four continents. He specializes in marketing content, long-form informative articles, real estate content, and travel articles that make him fantasize about where he'd like to live. In his down time, he confesses to a weakness for writing clickbait listicles.

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Natural Juice
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Really this one is very good about product description, If you want to sell more then your description should be very good about that product, Your description only thing that attract your customers, And about that in this article explained very well, So this is very helpful article…

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For the reason of Rank and Traffic, The description and the title of the Product is main things, In this article explained very well about the description about a particular products, thanks for sharing this type of valuable article…

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I would LOVE to have a job writing these sorts of product descriptions, but the projects I’ve been in all want really boring, non-fluffy, pretty well scripted content. It’s frustrating , to say the least, when requirements such as always starting with an action verb prevent you from writing your most interesting content, especially when you’re writing 700 descriptions about the same type of product, i.e., rugs. I sometimes want to start my own e-commerce site just so I can PDs like what I would like to see.

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The sheer number of products listed just on Amazon can make writing distinctive product descriptions seem hopelessly daunting. This post is full of great advice about writing product descriptions that will grab customers’ attention. Including three examples of effective product descriptions is especially helpful.

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